Letters From the Trenches

Whats Inportant About me

The inportant thing about Adelei is that she is an amazing mathematican.
Adelei is cuddly,kind and outstanding.
Adelei like to do art, play and sing.
But the inportant thing about Adelei is that she is an amazing mathematican.

100 WC

It was a dark, gloomy afternoon in the depths of the woods.  I was in my spooky house that night and a stone had broken my window. Then a cat walked up to me and meowed. When I was walking home my house was lifted by an invisible man. He is strong, he is bad and he is glad that he is lifting my house. He thinks that it is funny. It was dawn and I went into my pool. I was training for swimming. Invisible man would think that I am the strongest. My eyes turned green with anger. To Be Continued.

Google Docs With Wisconsin

Today I was planning using Google docs on my Harris burdick story. I Have a buddy for my Harris burdick story. Her name is Elizabeth. I am doing a story of Harris burdick's. It is called Archie, smith boy wonder. On my planning All of the boxes are filed in. But not all of them. I am up to writing the story.

...Slowly The Sky Got Darker...

...Slowly The Sky Got Darker...

We always take our dog for a walk in town, We decided to take her to the beach for a play. My dog splashed, splashed and splashed the icy cold water on me. I was wet everywhere! Then I went to get change in my spare cloths. My mum said "It is getting late and it is school tomorrow and I don’t want you to get late at your science, learning school" Then we went back to my dad’s red and white car and took my woolly, furry wet dog. I hope we return some time in the holidays.

Fireworks

Fireworks,fireworks amazing as a canon fireworks,fireworks what can you see.
Fireworks,fireworks loud as a exploding canon fireworks.
Fireworks smell like smoke not to good to smell smoke.
The flashing falling fireworks.
Rainbow colored fireworks.
Amazing splashes of water.
Colourful raining diamonds.
Pretty lighting bombs.
The raining blue fireworks.

Living In A Volcano

Once there was a girl could Rebecca was going into a hot living volcano. She got a ladder so she can feel what is like in there. She said that it feels like it is steaming hot! Then Rebecca saw  it night time then she went home. When it was morning Rebecca went back to the volcano and she got her hover board and she surfed in the volcano and she had straps around her feet so she would not go in the lava. Rebecca had on electric gloves on because she wants to hit it on the lava wall in the volcano. She only want to hit it on the wall because she thinks it is fun. Rebecca saw it night time again and she went home and she fell asleep. The next day Rebecca came to the volcano and she saw it melting in the volcano and it was boiling in the volcano. Rebecca went home and put something cold so she would not get hot or sick. When Rebecca came back she saw it melting again but she was all right and she surfed in the lava and she did not do it fast because she will get hurt. She did it very carefully and the lava was going bigger and bigger and bigger suddenly...the lava flooded and everything is melting and the lava was almost going to Rebecca's house and then Rebecca  fell and something catches her and it was a...JET PACK. She was so excited and she was very luck that all the jet packs saved everyone and they flew all the way to a airplane and everyone want to keep the jet packs and the people had jet packs they flew out and went to the lava but they didn't touch the lava and they were only half way and they went to another street and it had a volcano and it will never flud again. Rebecca and her family saw a house with a brick wall and a giant brick house and it has lots of rooms. THE END
From Adelei

spider map

To The Once-ler

Once-ler
74 Lerkim St
Truffala Place


Dear Once-ler,


Why are you being bossy? The animals need trees for homes and food. The next thing is why are you cutting down all the trees? People need oxygen and if people or animals don't have oxygen they will die and people will leave. The next thing is slow down your business as people do not need thneeds.The next thing is to stop being bossy and rude and you a being greedy as well.

Yours sincerely,
Adelei
 

Sam and the floaty alien on the moon

Sam fell asleep and he had a dream.Sam 's dream was about himself and his friend the floaty alien.
Sam went in his rocket to go to the spotty moon and he saw his friend the floaty alien.When Sam got out of his rocket but before Sam got out of the rocket Sam needed to go his lunch so didn't starve and also the alien. When Sam got out Sam did not see the alien and when Sam jumped Sam was floating in the air. The alien popped his head out because he smelt sandwiches. Sam and the alien felt happy.They had lunch together on the moon. When Sam got in his rocket he went home. When Sam woke up he was back home with his family and he was excited.

Dark and spooky

There is a rock footpath. When you stand on it, it feels  hard like a strong tree. The green grass is spiky grass it feels like soft green grass or it feels cold grass. There's a roof it's made out of tree twigs from big trees or small trees. It feels like the trees a rough and wiggly. When I was walking along the bridge I looked in the water and suddenly ... I fell! in the water and I got wet so I got up on the bridge and went through the forest and I went back home to dry myself off. Then tomorrow I go to the forest and go back to the tree house. When I woke up I walked through the forest then I was at the tree house. I walked inside and the door was squeaky. When I got inside it was hot then I saw someone did something I did not know what it was so I checked it out and it was ... fire fire someone set  the house on fire . Fire is so bad to touch you get burnt. I went outside and look at the darkness.
It was spooky outside. It was spooky outside because there was no one around me. I was scared there was no one around me and I thought there was a fish monster all! around me. And I thought there was a giant going to stand on me and scwish me but... It! is morning time because I sleped in the tree house. I left the fire on so I get warm. The fire is good to wom you and I brought a Blanket with me. And I dreamed about those things. So I went through the forest and went home and find my togs and have a swim in the river only it has nothing in the river. And the river was clear. I went to go and have a swim because it was a nice day.


This is my draft piece of writing. Please leave a comment about what I did well and what I need to work on.