Thursday, September 5, 2013

Suddenly I Heard A Crack...

Suddenly I Heard A Crack... One stormy night there was a girl called Rebecca and she was standing next to her family. Then...suddenly I heard a crack in my house. Rebecca and my family were looking around the house. Rebecca felt something dripping on her head. Then she stepped back and looked up. Rebecca was running to her family quickly. Then Rebecca told her mum and dad “I found the crack mum it is in the kitchen.”Dad and mum went to the kitchen to have a look. Mum and dad went to the kitchen and they saw an enormous puddle and the roof stopped dripping.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Adelei

    You did really making your story interesting by building suspense. Well done!