tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4914229340178768617.post7083487330590478888..comments2019-06-28T17:23:47.712+12:00Comments on Adelei's Learning: Living In A VolcanoPowerful Learners in Room 7!http://www.blogger.com/profile/09573781755387874599noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4914229340178768617.post-16684039622994156072013-10-02T13:05:42.087+13:002013-10-02T13:05:42.087+13:00Hi again Adelei
I tweeted this link to my teacher ...Hi again Adelei<br />I tweeted this link to my teacher friends so keep checking to see if you get comments!<br />Mrs Natusch<br /><br />PS - I think Mrs Paton has commented! ;)Powerful Learners in Room 7!https://www.blogger.com/profile/09573781755387874599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4914229340178768617.post-14803607286664429812013-10-02T10:17:19.236+13:002013-10-02T10:17:19.236+13:00Hi Adelei
I can see you've been very busy duri...Hi Adelei<br />I can see you've been very busy during your term break writing - well done! I really liked the way your story showed us a problem for the character Rebecca, and then you solved this problem too. As a reader, I got very worried when she was surfing on the lava as it got bigger and bigger! But then, I felt relieved when she found the JET PACK! great solution :)<br /><br />Thanks for sharing this with us.<br /><br />From Mrs Paton Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06410075396835225852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4914229340178768617.post-38876621053723977032013-10-02T09:34:16.637+13:002013-10-02T09:34:16.637+13:00Hi Adelei
Wow! Going into a steaming, hot volcano ...Hi Adelei<br />Wow! Going into a steaming, hot volcano would be very interesting! I am glad Rebecca found a jet pack so she could fly out of the volcano. Aren't you clever for writing a story on your blog in the holidays! Awesome job!<br />I like the descriptions you have used to describe the volcano. <br />Can you check your spelling for me? Is it "could" you need in your first sentence or 'called"? <br />I a wondering where did Rebecca get the ladder from? <br />I hope you are enjoying your holidays!<br />From Mrs NatuschPowerful Learners in Room 7!https://www.blogger.com/profile/09573781755387874599noreply@blogger.com